No one notices

by TeArS R FaLLiNg   Sep 29, 2005


Just sit and watch the sky
watch the time go by
because no one notices
when all you do is cry

watch the door close when they leave
feel the coldness you receive
because no one notices
and you can not breathe

watch the heavy rain
as it falls once again
because no one notices
when this rain is really your pain

watch their fake disguise
as they look into your eyes
because no one notices
they do not understand your cries

watch them try to understand
but offering a cold hand
because no one notices
they just THINK they can comprehend

watch them try to see
try to understand the real me
but no one notices
that i am really trapped not free

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I notice...and yeah no one notices me too...i go to school everyday...and be happy everyday...but they never knew the girl i am within me...they never...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow i love this..it's really deep. thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    That is an amazing poem. i know exactly what you mean. wow!!
    i'm so desperate for that hand...i know what you mean when you they're always cold...
    great work xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    Amazing work. You have captured exactly how it is. You have a great gift. Only someone who has been there can know what you know.

  • 18 years ago

    by Morgan

    I really like this poem. It's true. They seem to care, but they don't really. Good job.
    Morgan

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