Lost my will
by shawn hoskins Oct 1, 2005
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The bottles been calling and i'm slowly falling, i've tried my best to stay away, but it's getting harder each and every day, i've resisted for so long, but temptation has been urging me to come along, my will is strong but i'm feeling weak, i'm wanting to escape from these demon's that prey on the meek, i wish these feelings would just go away, and leave me to be sober just another day, it's hard to see a man with a soul thats so easily broken by thoughts that are so provoking, i know if i take just one sip i'll be on a binge once again, and the darkness that has plagued me will come out from within, this is a battle i've fought time and time again,only this time i feel i\'ve lost my will to win. |
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16 years ago
by Lonely Rider
This one is another wonderful write...
very emotional... very powerful...
beautifully written..
excellent job... -
18 years ago
by Natalie
Aw, That's sad!! Great poem though! Just kinda sad.. But keep it up 5/5
`natalie xx -
18 years ago
by Emma
This was a really good poem. i just loved it so much. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5 -
18 years ago
by NannO
That was so deep.. i lykd it.. i loved ur last line..
thnx 4 the comment
take care -
18 years ago
Wow this is sad... I've read a few poems don't leave the site, yeah sometimes its rough but there are always a few nice people that make it worth while and the fact that you can share your poetry with the world should make you smile a bit..... but maybe not. Thanx a whole lot for your comments.
