Last poem
by shawn hoskins Oct 2, 2005
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I guess this is the last poem i will write for awhile, i can't think of anything to write so i guess i better quit while i'm ahead, thats just my style, no one cares about the words that come from my heart, theres nothing left in this soul that's been torn apart, i'm down and out theres nothing more to write about, so i guess this is my last goodbye, thanks for the comments when i was down they always helped me get by. |
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18 years ago
Boy...I'm so glad you kept writing even in a poem about not being able to write you did marvellously. You right with personality...your poems are original they have your voice and thats unique. That's what I love about them....keep writing...I'm sure I will hear from you soon...
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18 years ago
by LadyPearl
My favorite part ~was no one cares about the words that come from my heart, theres nothing left in this soul that's been torn apart,
Good job
~ you can still work on the flow. And I prefer if you write in a poetry format. -
18 years ago
Don't STOP! I love your poetry! You are REALLY good! I've been writing for four years and just started putting them on here! You are REALLY good! Please don't quit! :)
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18 years ago
~*OMG you can't stop writeing.....i mean your SO good at it! and im not juss saying that i'm 4real i love all your work, u juss have a way with words, and you make all your poems so deep and meaningful...well i guess im saying that you should think twice about quiting, cuz your really good, i hope you keep writeing, and if not good luck with whatever you deside to do next*~ Much love XoXo
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18 years ago
Thanks for the comments i really appreciate them you'll are so very kind and that's not my last poem im just having trouble thinking of something to write but i'll come up with something thanks for commenting it means alot
