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by RainbowSlider   Oct 2, 2005


I wondered what
the prize was.
I wondered when
I had truly
passed the test.
I wondered when
I was really honest.
I wondered how
I could truly
be accepted.
I wondered what
it felt to human.
I wondered how
I could truly help.
I wondered where
the tombstones were
in the land of
the living.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brilliant end and I love the short, abrupt lines here. Another great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this one.. ur preaty good. I loved the last few lines very deep I never would have expected it. Nice work

  • 'I wondered where
    the tombstones were
    in the land of
    the living.'
    I loved the final few lines, i think they are really powerful.

    xxx cici xxx