Still alone in the park

by Mark   Oct 8, 2005


She sits on her own
In the dark
I'm wondering why
She's in the park

On the motionless swing
She appears for an hour
Is she waiting to be rescued?
Like the girl in the tower

We spoke few words
I saw her beautiful smile
Then thought of asking
For a number to dial

Hours more, on a bench by herself
Whilst, we were having fun
Couldn't help but speculate
Why she was with no one

It was fairly late
And it was very dark
I left with my friends
With you still alone in the park

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heya again, Yeah this is a really good poem.. Very sad but I understand.
    The flow was great and I really enjoyed reading it well done!

    Keep it up x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I really love this poem. You are good. Thank you for your comments on my poems it really meant to me. And yes it is true. All my poems are based on my life, it is the only way for me to express myself. And i see, you are good at it too! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tawnie

    That was a great poem....5/5 thanx for voting on mine..i thought i would return the favore.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was so sad and touching.
    and you wrote it as well as your other
    poems. I mean wonderfully.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww thats so sad, but its sweet too, you did a good job, the ending went down VERY smoothly, and I liked it alot, 5/5

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