Keep Me Breathing

by Arty   Oct 12, 2005


Tell me something very typical
remind me how you are so beautiful
lie to me
tell me what you don't see
anything to keep me breathing
tell me something typical
remind me why I'm so miserable
smile at me just keep me breathing
watching you, i know I'm bleeding
keep me alive
while you're living I'm sinking

don't tell me it's gone
don't tell me we're done
mite as well shoot the gun
please aim for my heart
i can't live without the other part
shoot the part that holds you
shoot my reality and what's true

tell me something different
something that won't keep me up at night

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  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    WoW..... deep linez. much propz. =)

    .:*La Boricua*:.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    That is amazing, the way you write is unbelivable! great job!-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You took my breathe away...now I got it back...this is cool...why didn't you write more...nevermind...I'll check out the old ones later..I have to red it twice...it's too good...

  • 18 years ago

    by HεartxOfxGlass

    Its good so far....