Lover's Reject Island

by Atomic   Oct 13, 2005


Broken souls gathered here,
Process of ponderous mending
Rancorous crimson tears,
Emotional pain never ending.

Oblivious wishes to be loved,
Hearts shattered in many ways.
Broken wings of a moribund dove,
Symbolizes hopes gone astray.

Sequestered spirits on this island,
Recovering from the cuts inside.
Trying hardest to comprehend,
Love is a façade of many lies.

Poignancy of the aching hearts,
Contrite for human emotions.
Mendacity from the far start,
Lies of a forever devotion.

Broken saccharine smiles,
Metamorphosis of tainted love.
Patience is worth the while,
Fly away angelic dove.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!©

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Sorry the poem

    it took me a while to figure it out since i am a blonde but this poem is great and of course the vocabulary you have makes it great

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Ruby is right i love your vocab and makes your poems awesome talent talent what more can i say i love your poems atomic!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Excellent! 5/5!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    You have one BIG vocabluary! it does wonders for your poems. i have diceided to read one extra poem. hope you dont mind. i love this. its so beautiful. it really makes my heart ach. sounds like the kind of place id fit into!!!

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    *dazed* i think i just hurt my brain trying to figure out what the heck this all ment! well, its under love, so im guesing its a love poem... i love your colorful vocabulary, though you should tone down for the simple minded readers such as I.

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