Scars

by my_little_secret   Oct 13, 2005


You say you've failed.
That because you're 'weak' your teenage years
Are steeped in blood and pain and tears.
Because of the hurt, you cut yourself,
With disregard for your body's health
And now your wrists are ringed with scars
A solar pattern of blood red scars.
But did you know your braceletted wrist
Is calling out to be held and kissed?
Crushed velour stitches on reams of pure silk,
Tear drops of red in vases of milk.
Outward signals of inner confusion,
A smiling face that is just an illusion.
Consequence - pain - ofan action oft taken,
Consequence, maybe, of a childhood forsaken.
~not ended very well, but it's a work in progress~

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oooh, didnt realize it was added to! very good, scary4 me, but good writing.
    sorry :( i wish it wasnt happening. love u xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Still great

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Oh this rocks and i didnt comment :( im sorry, it's great

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Incredible incredinle poem i loved it it gave me some hope that i could stop thanx gggggreat poem
    ;-)

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Katie, i had to stop reading, i couldn't stop crying, i dont know what to say, i still dont. its painful to see the truth from the outside i guess, but its a v.good piece, your poetry is amazing. im sorry, and i luv u so much xxxxxxx

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