The dad I have never known

Aww hunn is that true? im so sorry if it is...he's missing out big time...**hug**

Oh, wow, thats awesome! Great job expressing that! I'm sorry about your dad, even if you didn't know him. Well, keep writing!

Wow! i like this poem. I especially loved the line " Guess what's loved cannot be hated"

Mind if i use that afor my frinds and also my own quotes site? 5/5

~stevie~
~yellowfeverlime~

Awwww. You are very true hun. Even though he did not kiss you or say goodbye, he is still your dad and if it wasnt for him, you wouldnt be here either. I'm glad you and your mum made it too. A lot of emotion was put into this poem and i feel a lot of hidden feelings too. well written. :) Keep up the good work hun! You are an amazing poet
Rosie xXx

Hey great poem yet again! this stanza doesnt really make sense tho...

"I was only a couple of months,
He must have loved me tons,
To leave his innocent daughter,
Not even look back and bother."

it kinda says two different things at once. but its still a great peom!
hannah