Private Things Can't Tell

by Kirsty   Oct 16, 2005


You wasn't meant to read it all
The words in me became so small
See the picture on every wall
Emotions die and begin to fall

You weren't meant to read it all

There's pages still that I must do
Erase it all and focus on you
Burn the ink and start one new
You cries are heard and the ashes blew

You weren't meant to see it all

I closed my eyes and lost my way
The moment possesses the day
First thoughts take over for what I say
The truth has redeemed you to stay

You weren't meant to know it all

The paper spills over again
Revealing that one dreaded name
Your eyes fade out I see your pain
The face you see it not the same

You weren't meant to read it all

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  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This one is a little confusing but it's still really good
    i like the single lines after verse or whatever it's called x

  • 18 years ago

    by sharni

    I was meant to read this one because you told me 2...lol....I really like this one because it is about someone reading something that they was not meant to...Well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Thanks for the comments both
    Yeah I shall change that to make it easier fankoo :)
    I'm so unknown didnt quite understand it
    The point of it is so that the meanings disguised because the person I wrote it for I dont really want them to know its about them
    but its not one of my best thanks any way
    Take care byee xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved it. But I think it would sound better if " You wasn't.." was changed to you weren't.. idk. It's still very well written. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. *> : PainOfOne

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