A Nothing, A No-One, A Wasted Space

by Tess   Oct 21, 2005


You say you care

But what is it that you care about?

I am a nothing, a no-one, a wasted space

So I am sitting on my bed

It seems to me that I am spending my whole life here

I kick and scream and laughter still fills the house

HELLO?

Can you not hear my pleas for help?

With a knife that is newly sharpened

I break the skin deep

Blood gushes and I feel free

Nothing is inside to make me ache anymore

I am floating but suddenly I drop

What have I achieved?

Just more problems and reasons for me to hate myself

***Your rating/comments are greatly appreciated and the favour will always be returned***

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  • 18 years ago

    by JessicaaSlater

    Grreat idea behind the poem and i love the end -- "What have I achieved?

    Just more problems and reasons for me to hate myself" it was a great conclusion!... the flow wasn't as much there as in your other poems, so you could've made that a bit better. but other then that. Grreat job! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marissa

    Thanks for the comment and WOW! I have felt like this so much. It's nice to know that other people feel the way I do. I hope that everything turns out right for you!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    There is alot of emotion and force in this one. You must have realy gotten into it when you were writeing it.
    Love Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Thanks Mary! I am proud of you too! You are my rock! :P xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Im so proud of u tessy,
    well done

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