Fall Away

by Krete   Oct 28, 2005


Walk it,
daily life,
smile, cry,
enjoy strife.

Put it on,
the day mask,
enjoy the run,
of daily task.

Hurry it up,
position it all,
push yourself,
to upward fall.

Pretty & Perfect,
life made up lie,
make that sect,
settle or cry.

Ruin the life,
of some poor fool,
one you wish,
you could rule.

You think,
you've got it,
but in truth,
your the rocket.

Ready to set off,
ready to go.
Soon, my dear,
you will explode.

Fall away,
my best friend,
pretty & perfect,
your what they send.

Your 'all' worth it,
yeah, the one girl,
who always flirt it,
my tiny hurl.

I guess,
every story,
has its ending,
even when,
its all gory..

Goodbye Wendy.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    I love the idea of the structure of the poem. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    A very powerful sentiment of both sadness and obstinance to me. very beautiful.
    Always,
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    Such sadness portrayed so simply. This is a very clever write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    A very sad poem, but still a good poem.

    I wish you'd write something... happy? :]

    Thank you for your comment. You really did brighten my morning.

    God bless you.