Left me

by Just That Girl   Nov 1, 2005


You left me
it hurts
to know that
your never gonna be beside me
that i would never again
get to hold your hand
your gentle touch
i will miss
your caring voice
was a bliss
you left me
it hurts

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It hurts very much if someone left us...I know that feeling...cause apparently...the friend that I was mad left the state without saying goodbye 2 me...and I miss him very much...

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'you gentle touch'
    'you caring voice'
    Is it supposed to be 'your'?

    I like the shortness of this poem. It's simple, the words are easy, yet it says alot. Deep with emotions that is. I really enjoyed this. How each verse continues to the other, keeps the emotions rolling along. Nice write! =D