My Silent Suicide

by PassingAngel   Nov 2, 2005


Maybe when I'm gone
You'll finally notice me
You see, I won't be here long
Soon I'll finally be free

The pain you cause
Before, you never saw
But maybe you'll finally see
When I take my last fall

Soon I'll be nothing
But a shadow in your dreams
My mind is silently corrupting
And my smile is not what it seems

I hope you'll be happy
When you've finally destroyed me
You can't undo what you've done
So here are my last words,
Goodbye and so long.

© PassingAngel

*I was really bored in moral class so I just scribbled down some words and this is what came out of it...*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Very deep and touching .. ACE ..!!
    I couldn't fine 'never Again' so i commented on this one =] .. if you do find it ,... just message me :)

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Really great poem...i do the same thing at school...ur rrreeeaalllllllllyyyy
    sopper great writter:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    WOW!! I love your work..I truly do hun and Im here for you if u ever want to talk!! lol well keep up the wonderful work u r amazing girl!
    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tina

    That was a great poem. Keep up the good work.