Just Hate Me

by Carmen   Nov 2, 2005


*I didn't really know what category to put this in, so I just stuck it under life. Please tell me what you think*

I know you like me,
It's not hard to tell.
I'm sorry it was me,
Whom which you fell.

You're a nice guy,
So sweet and friendly.
That's why this is so hard,
I have to let you down gently.

You're my best friend,
But you like me more.
Why do we have to go further?
What would that be for?

The reason I don't like you,
Is a reason I can't tell.
Sadly you now know,
The reason for which you fell.

I'm sorry,
But he's the one I truly love.
My one, my only,
He flies through my heart like a dove.

Please,
Just hate me.
Then, my friend,
You'd finally be free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I like most of it. it sort of sad and gently. but i dont really understand the ending.

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    Thats very beautiful....with this poem, i can tell that you are e very nice person...good for you.....5/5.....Check mine as well and write your comments i will appreciate that.....

  • 18 years ago

    by 100Percent_inlove

    It's a good poem. i know how you feel too. this happened to me before...though i regreted it later. but now it's even more difficult. great poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This situation sucks i know, so sorry bout that, anyways though this was a good poem a bit choppy in some areas but the overall flow is good the only spot worth pointing out is the very last stanza the last stanza is an important one in every poem the one you wrote for this is really bad it dosnt flow whatsoever it does rhyme but you can't tell because the flow is so off, id think about rewritng it but thats the only bad thing about this so 5/5 great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Ray

    Kind of a shaky start, but a powerful middle. I would take out the last stanza and just add the first and third line of the last stanza together with the fifth stanza. Just so that the rhythm would stay the same throughout the poem.

    "Please, I'm sorry,
    But he's the one I truly love.
    My friend, my one, my only,
    He flies threw my heart like a dove."

    But that's just me.

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