Heart beat

by master of shadow   Nov 5, 2005


The light can be seen,
But not be reached,
The darkness is there,
You're dead to the world,
Trapped in this void,
This sphere of pain,
Unable to escape,
All hope is ebbing away,
Each day it worsens,
Every second the light moves away,
No sound but your heart beat,
The only constant in this life,
The only thing you can control,
The only think you can stop.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Good poem but the flow could use some work... Other than that, I love the imagery and concept.

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Once again, amazing work. I love your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    I really enjoyed this poem, in a dark kind of way.....great work 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    I like this, it is dark and kind of scary. I especially like the idea of pain as a sphere, it gives a normally abstract concept tangible shape. Good job, and thanks for your comments!

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Very good poem...5/5...though you might want to fix

    Youâ??re dead to the world,

    the "are" is a little messed up...other then that no imporvment needed!!

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