Fighting the Memories

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Nov 7, 2005


Sitting alone in my room as the world passes by.
Listening to music, escaping reality once again.
Back in the ever so present pain felt for so long.
Just as I thought it was over, it begins yet again.

Slowly losing my battle, going down under.
Memories long forgotten haunt me yet again.
Nightmares consume me, silent cries in the night.
Fighting every temptation, yet I slowly slip.

Sitting alone in my room, fighting the memories.
Fighting what had consumed me for so long.
Fighting for the life I rediscovered not long ago.
Fighting to save my "new beginning", to save myself...

*definitely not my best, but I had to let it out...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hun, I will still be around on the site and I will always be here for you when ever you need me, just shut or PM alright and honestly I expect atleast one!

    lol Love you always
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Hey it werent all that bad it was really quite gd! and like pure silence i am all outta comments sorri xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    You were "fighting" to keep it alive, because you are THE FIGHTER! It wasn't bad, no, but not your best either. I enjoyed reading it, nonetheless. Good job!

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    It seems very familir... or im losing my mind... so yeh.but i like it ...i dunno what to say im outta comments too many no time to recover *falls over*

    Love youuuuu
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    I hate giving constructive criticism because it makes me feel mean. (lol)

    You've got a good start here, If you keep working on certain areas i think you'll make this quite a solid piece..

    Anyways i like the title, it's bold. (Very Eye Catching)

    Enjoyed reading this.. keep e'm coming :)