NEVER LET YOU GO

by myshiningstar14   Nov 13, 2005


Unmerciful tears role down my face, like rain on a window pane; and like a stain it still remains. My face steams up, from the stream of burning tears and I simply find that I can barely see you.

Intimate ruptured soul, illuminating from the depths of me, and the weight of my heart becomes greater and I find that I cannot bear to hear your name.

I never should of let you go, it hurts so bad. You're in arms length, but i can't touch you, you're in hopes grasp but i can't feel you, and you're in loves heart, but i can't feel the soft beat, against my chest.

Sometimes it's as if you're as close as my very next breath, until I found I wasn't breathing alone!

***please comment** Lissa xox

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  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Unmerciful tears role down my face, like rain on a window pane; and like a stain it still remains.

    THAT WAS THE MOST DEEP LINE..ive ever seen you write..That was Wow..MAGICAL..
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    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather*-*

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  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    This is very touching poem well written

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Good poem, great writing, keep it up, emmaxxx