Deaths Door

by Tess   Nov 18, 2005


Through deaths door I was headed
Until you took control
You made my thoughts gain meaning
I had to carry on

I did not need distraction
Nothing stood in my way
To stop the acts I had chosen
From taking me away

The blade is still left sitting
Where once, I left it be
As I was finished killing
The numbness left in me

The pain once felt, it hurts
To think of how things were
If not for you, once destined
To open up deaths door

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Babe that was hot
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Deeeeeeeeeeeeeep

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    I really liked this poem. Both in writing and meaning.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    Very good, im not sure, at the end did the person die? I think so... but i just wasn't really sure. anyways 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    OMG!!!
    what a great poem. tessy bear u ROCK
    EmmA says hi tessy bear! ! ! (emma is soo cute lol)
    okies tessy well done luv ya heaps
    xoxoxoxoxox
    ~*MaRy*~( and EmmA) luv u tessy bear

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