Dont wanna write anymore

by RachelAnne   Nov 18, 2005


Sadness came over me here tonight,
I cant seem to do it nothing feels very right,
I tried to write a poem it was clear to sight,
but I dont think I can ever do it again try as i might

I dont think I can write anymore,
or for that matter if i could before

No words,
no worries,
no thoughts came to mind,
just pain,
just lies,
just feelings were all I could find

being the way i am you wouldnt understand,
seeing the things i saw you wouldnt get the flaw,
you wouldnt feel my pain until my feeling were what you gain,
these are all just thoughts of me I couldnt fix the knots

just staring at the paper wanting to scream in lead,
I just sort of sat there and decided to go to bed,
I dont quite get this and maybe thats for the better I dont quite see why maybe its all just in my head

but its true,
im not lying to you

and I dont think that I can write anymore

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    U can and u should as u dont do it for urself as u cant be that mean..right?? so let it flow as u just dont know the magic of poem, it can easily turn somebody's life upside down...so keep up the good work.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Dont stop writing! your great! kepp your head up tho, i know exactly how you feel. jesx

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    I know how you feel. Maybe you could try what i do, just stop for while and come back to writting later. your poems are great an d it's okay to take the occasional break from it, you come up with heaps of new stuff too.
    love,
    sammi

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    That's sad hun...
    if that's the case, just maybe take a break and then write when you feel like you can again. Writing shouldn't be a chore it shoul be a pleasure.
    Sometimes i find that if too much is going on, too many feelings, that's when i can't write either...
    hope you're ok..
    id love it if u'd check out my poems xoxox

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