Hold Me?

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Nov 27, 2005


Hold me now, as the light begins to fade,
My eyes are losing, the wonderful shade of jade.
Hold me please, as the tears fall down,
My eyes feel as if they are going to drown.

Hold me close, as I tell you my fears,
Let me wet you shoulder, with my tears.
Hold me tight, never let go,
Because life sucks, there's nothing to show.

Hold me up, no matter how much I want to fall,
And talk to me for hours, when it's you that I call.
Hold me, and say you'll never leave me alone,
I'm slowly dying, yet I can still smell cologne.

Please just hold me, say you love me,
Because I love you, can't you see?
Yes, just hold me, I need you now,
Don't treat me like snow, as if your a plow.

I need you to hold me, don't push me away,
No matter what you do, my love's here to stay.
I'll die if you don't hold me tight,
Because I cut myself tonight.

I hold my wrist, because of you,
I;m almost dead, but it's not yet time to say ado.
Hold me, as my lips turn cold,
Treat me as precious as gold.

Hold me, as my life is leaving,
As I start to have a hard time breathing.
Hold me as I say goodbye,
You say it back, but I've missed your reply.

I've died.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Omg!!!! i feel the same way...excellent work! wonderful!

    please read my poem: please hold me tight, and you might relate somewhat to how i feel....

    if you ever need anyone to listen, i'm here for ya! ok? don't forget.

    lots of love and hugs, always,

    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow you continue to amaze me with your writing... your very good at it and every poem i read of yours is better than the last one... i really liked how you wrote this one! its so emotional and i love every word of it! you are definelty being added to my favorites! nice job!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Wow great poem i loved it !!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Delinquent

    Dat wz pretti gud...!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Pretty good. :o)

    Michelle