Winter snow

by firexflys   Dec 3, 2005


It\'s kinda hard to understand i hope you all get it anyways i didnt know what to put it under so.. if you R/R/C i'll do the same for you

WINTER SNOW.

A winter blank upon the ground
The white snow is falling till
It's fallen all the way down
Watching out the window
As the snowflakes fall
I wonder if that's is going to be it all
When will it stop?
When will they not fall?

The cold breeze sends shivers down
My body and I being to breath
The fresh air is refreshing to me
It wakens me up and makes me aware
Showing me things I haven't seen there
Opening my eyes to anew making me
See just what I have to do.

And as the time goes by I sit and just watch
Looking at the snow just fall watching
As the night become dark and the snow fall
Harder and harder covering everything around
Wanting to hide some where warm and far away
Wishing that I didn't see what I have to do knowing
Now that everything will change and nothing now
Will ever be there same

I know what I have to do and this
Winter snow just let me know
But in my mind there something
Only I can tell, what it showed me it's not
Right, and it's not true, so I am ignore it
That what it showed me I have to do

© written by ~fireXfly

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl. great p0em 0nce again. very well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    OMG this is like fantastic - I couldn't quite enterpret all the emotions in it but I kinda felt it. Thanks for a brilliant poem =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I love the snow!! But this poem had a slight twist to it. I got all excited, and at the end it got serious. I don't quite understand, but i get the jist of it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey this is a great poem..its really good...kinda like a riddle..u gotta work out what the snow is! lol..its real good..keep up the good work m8!:)
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sing me another sad song

    Great poem =] thanks for the comment! keep up all the good work

    ~Jessi