Jake

by master of shadow   Dec 7, 2005


He hated life,
could take no more,
was told his death was near,
but a slow death he did not want,
so one cold dark morn,
he took his gun,
and ended it all,
a slow death he could not take,
wanted it to end,
to suffer no more,
so took his gun,
to his brain,
and fell to the icy floor,
Jake is gone forever,
he is no more,
a single bullet ended it all,
he succeeded where i have often failed,
took his life,
ended his suffering,
left us all behind,
left us alone,
alone to face the cruel world,
the world that took him from us,
the world that made him no more.

RIP Jake Tudor (13/05/82 - 01/12/05)

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  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow really powerful poem! It's so sad...

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Great poem, very sad!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Very good! very emotional you can feel what everyones going through, btw thanks for the comment!

    xxx
    Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    It's a great poem but so shocking and sad. I am sorry for the loss - it's true how life can be cruel. Also thanks for the comment you gave me. You have great talent for writing its just a shame that there is no good to write for.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Amazing... i love how you wrote it... so so sad.... but extremly well written.. keep it up.. your a great writer...

    sammie

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