Things Need To Change Dad

by Spitfire   Dec 25, 2005


I'm sitting here
just thinking
so many questions come to mind
i cant think of anything but you
and i think
why?
its not supposed to be like that
I'm not supposed care if you love me
I'm not supposed to wonder if you're going to call
I'm not even supposed to care that u don't
i saw u today
you've changed
as I'm writing this
I'm at my aunt's house
and i don't cry in front of people
but i think its time i say something
and its time i try to show a little love
I'm sorry
i cant do this
Dad
i know I'm not supposed to care
and i don't want to
and I'm not going to tell anyone that
But deep inside you're my dad
and i think things need to change
.......................

i don't care what u think
comment if u want
I'm just a Lil down now
i will write more later this week and stuff

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  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    If you've ever read my poem "Where are you Daddy?", which I think you have, you'll see that I feel the same way. Great job with the flow, you didn't ryhme your words or anything, and that's a true poet.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby Dont Be Scared

    I really like this poem and i know how you feel. thanks for the comment on my poem. i really like this i give u a 5!!! lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thx for r/c on my poem! I gotta read more of ur work, I know ive read better poems by you this one was good, not all that dark as i thought it was gonna be , but definatly a good write hun! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    SPITFIRE>>> I just want to say thanks for all the compliments on my poems... I really hope you go something from them.. you ar a great writter keep up the good work:)
    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Berry

    Awesome poems
    love it
    keep up the good work

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