New you

by crystaljean88   Dec 26, 2005


I don't know why you done it or how,
But i wish you will take it all back right fu**ing now!

What you done tore us apart,
Worse then that, you broke my damn heart.

Every night i cry silent tears,
Cause of what you done you brought back all my fears.

I'm not fully sure what the whole cause is.. but i know of one,
You completely changed and because of that I'm done.

You think i don't care about you but i really do,
But for the problems i have i can't deal with the "new" you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    I like it u did a really good job on this one sis love ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed reading this.
    I thought the flow was off in a couple lines, but apart from that you did a great job, and the last line hit me hard, it has huge impact.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I really like this poem because it's straight to the point but also original and creative at the same time. You've definitely got talent hun, so keep up the great writing, and I hope that you're okay.

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