The Unrhymed Love Part II

by The Poetic Child   Jan 5, 2006


As you see i love you so much
that these words that you read
are nothing but words on paper
from what i really feel in my heart

My love for you is like a diamond
its so hard to break and is so rare
Shines through the light
just like you shine in my heart

Some mock me for what i write
they say what do i know
but I'm here to tell you now
id risk my life for you

id put my life on the line
to keep you safe
to show you how much i love
to show you my love is endless

i lay on my bed and just think,
i think about you and your beauty
i think about the laughs and tears
i think about all the memories we have

Because those are the memories
i will always hold close to my heart
The memories i will never forget
the memories that reflect in my eye

My love for you can not be broken
It stays up through the struggles
the weather and weight of pain
that i have, does not effect my love

every-time i hear you say i love you
a smile appears and my heart grows
even though my love i don't always show
I'm writing this poem now for you

i want you to know what i feel
i want you to know that the love i have
is all for you and i love you so much
I'm afraid to lose you sometimes

I love you.....
Dedicated to my Girlfriend Christina

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Just as great as the first one! i still love the unrhyming scheme and i think it was perfect for this poem... great job!!...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Hey hun this poem is probably a little better than the first one.. You did an amazing job and for being only 14 your a great writer!!!! I wish I could write long poems like you mine are pretty much short and simple but thank you so much for your comments it means so much!!! Ttyl let me know when you have new poems or better yet I will add you in my favorites.. Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Ah so i see that there's a part two = ) this is really an amazing piece of work and i'm really like the non-rhyming scheme!!! My fave stanza-

    Because those are the memories
    i will always hold close to my heart
    The memories i will never forget
    the memories that reflect in my eye

    I don't know why but this part just spoke out to me and the words flowed sooo well together!!! This girl is lucky to have you!!
    Keep it up!!!
    luv jess xoxo