Our Un-linked Deaths

by Fig   Jan 8, 2006

And here we are
Pearl shimmered hour
Our tranquil souls serene.
Your eyes too far,
Too soon to mar
My gaze, with bloody scene

Peace so removed
The link unproved
And calm in different ways
There’s your depart
My weeping heart
To soothe the life with tears

Too soon again
To drench in rain
Chilled hopes were still detached
Tearing along
Screech metals song
And from my grasp death snatched

Your face blood-stained
And new ingrained
Upon that churning road
Where death is rife
And signs of life
Eventually corrode

So you’re relieved
And I believed
This time you’d survive
But calmly soothed
Quietly removed
As both our souls spin-dived

Our of our existence

(You want to know what its about...ask me)


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  • 17 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! TELL TELL TELL!!! that was so...so...fantasticallyamazoinglybrilliantlysupoib. it really really really was. the pace was so calm and peaceful, reflecting on the sadness....oh! i dont know how to describe it's maginficence!!! i think i need a badge.

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Great write. The sound and flow was smooth and well done. I enjoyed it. The rhyme scheme is the best and the words were great.
    ~The Unforgiven

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    ME ME ME!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's beautiful! possibly a new favourite...possibly! i love the peace and quiet of it with that overtone of sadness and morbidity as you so creatively put once upon a time :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Oo can i be told what it is about aswell,please? great poem by the way.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cleo

    That was amazing! it was so beautifully written-i loved the words you chose. i wud love to know what it is about-ples tell me xxx