Part I: Love Will Be...

by Atomic   Jan 13, 2006


During a deep intimate moment,
With my new and gentle groom.
I caught sight of a slender figure,
Hiding in the shadows of the room.

It appeared to be a lovely woman,
Draped in the purest of white lace.
With tears streaming downwards,
Streaking her sad and pallid face.

She stepped out into the moonlight,
Her complexions became quite clear.
Her flowery lips spoke loud words,
But silence was the loudest I can hear.

She reached a hand for my husband,
Love and hatred shone in her eyes.
Is it him that she soulfully desire,
Or is it him that she so much despise?

Her expression changed ever so often,
Sad, lost, lonely, love, fear, and dread.
Until the blood rolled off her temples,
Melting and painting her cheeks red.

All the while the tears rushed in rivers,
She pointed a shaking finger at him.
The sound of a beating heart grew,
Until she faded into a hopeless dim.

My husband's back was facing her,
He never saw the frightening scene.
But in a way I was glad he didn't, because,
You can't see what's meant to be unseen.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!©

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is really good! I can't wait to read part 2... the imagery in this was amazing..I could picture it all in my mind & it flowed very well.. Great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Micky

    Great job!!!

    Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

    LOVE
    Micky

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow.. this was just so Great.real creative.... Excellent Job.....Keep up the great work..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by MissAlotta

    "Draped in the purest of white lace.
    With tears streaming downwards,
    Streaking her sad and pallid face."

    Your Choice of Words are genuine.
    Remarkable Poem, Loved It. 5/5 ~Christina

  • 18 years ago

    by Mitch

    Wow.... thats all I can say.... wow. Beautiful job.