The Torment and Hurt Part V

by The Poetic Child   Jan 22, 2006


I know this poem is Long but Please Read, Vote and Comment i would Really Really Love it...

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

She was still upset
I didn't know what to do
no one for advice
no one to turn to

i only had one thing left
to tell her i much she means
if it was on the phone or in texting
anything by any means

i sent a text to her
3 pages long
On how i love her
and what nothing to go wrong

3 pages worth of love
but i could of written 9
my love is endless
i want her all mine

my words were limited
so i made it simple but strong
i want her to see my love
and i want to last long

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

i hope she the love
i hope she knows I'm real
that she knows I'm there
and really being for real

i want spend my life with her
and take our Battles Straight
i feel as if your my Only one
and i hope I'm not late

This is The Text I sent:

Listen Baby I want to tell you
This only very thing, i want to share
i want to let you know I'm with you forever
my heart is always there....

I love you babe so much
i cant picture us apart
i never want to lose you
your forever in my heart

i think about you every time
your always in my head
whether I'm up and sitting down
or sleeping in the bed....

Text End....

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I hope she comes to realize
how much she means to me
and I'm always there
and forever i shall be

the next day i wake up
i got a text on my phone
its my baby texting me
Now i cant feel alone

Her Text Back:

Listen baby I love you So much
Don't you ever forget it
I had a Unlit Candle
but you came and lit it

I will never break up with you
your my forever man
I want to spend my life with you
on your words i understand

I Love you SO much
This message i hope you keep
because the love i was Strong
My Love is so Deep....

Text End....

I felt so Rejoiced
I was So Glad
The Torment is Over
For I'm never Sad

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

THE END......

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    AAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!that is so sweet!! EXCELLENT!!!o my god that was wonderful! i loved reading it!...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nella Heartbreaker.

    Its fantastic! I like it a lot. Your really good at writing. 5/5 keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Wow this is really really good but i wish this can happen 4 me also, anyways glad everythings ok. take care