First Love

This is a nice poem that you can make stand out by breaking it up into qualified stanzas and using proper punctuation.

I like the detail you put into your feelings here. The air of intricacy is very impressive. Most men (including myself) forget the little things except when they're the ones doing them so it's a good reminder for us to stay on our toes!

Bret

Its ok not my favorite one but still good and simple

Nice poem sounded really pretty

This is a lovely poem, I really enjoyed it. I loved the way you described that you were writing his name and decorating it.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Im not sure why its got a low mark. maybe its just not liked by the ppl who rated it. i thought it was good. it was straight to the point, it flowed beautifully, what more can I say??? Rxcept it was also very cute. xx