Don't know were i'm bound
by shawn hoskins Jan 24, 2006
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I don't know were i'm going don't know were i'm bound, the good life is something i've searched for but never found,i need to find a way, a way to ease my pain,it seems so simple but nothing seems to change, i look out my window to a sky pouring rain,hoping for a little sunshine but everything remains the same, maybe someday the sun will shine down, but till then i'll just keep wondering a lost soul hoping to be found. |
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16 years ago
by victoria
Execellent job.
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17 years ago
by Kaylee
I'm not used to the format and it made the sentences feel off. But the word choice in itself was well beautiful. The ending held power and emotions. I just was taken aback at first of the format.
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18 years ago
by LadyPearl
Excellent job, it relates to me!
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18 years ago
~*Really good can relate 2 alot, well hope ur doing good theses days...5/5*~XoXo
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18 years ago
by Tiny Reader
Usually I don't like these types of 'prose' poems, but this one is different. The format can sometimes make them difficult to read, but with rhyme and a fairly consistent flow, it works well. Nice work
