Unnoticed

by Allison   Jan 26, 2006


Crimson tears fall from my veins
Specked with my many pains
As they fall my sorrows fade
Then I thank my blade

100 thousand drops have fallen
From my weakening arms
100 thousand tears have fallen
After each self-inflicted harm

Too many tears have fallen
From my dark blue eyes
I've screamed so many times
Yet no one hears my cries

I've been abandoned
Alone on this hell called earth
So many people have passed by
Not seeing my worth

But I will make them see
As the tears fall to the ground
That something good is gone
And will never come back around

As my body fails to move
And my eyes fail to close
They still don't notice the person
That was right in front of there nose

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This poem speaks alot of feelings i have myself. well done

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem is soo sad, but fantastic keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Micky

    Great job!!!

    Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

    LOVE
    Micky

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Amazing once again very deep and touching! so sad the opic though remember there is always someone who does notice you and who does care even if you havent noticed them xx ALLY xx well done1

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Very nice. the metaphor crimson tears is exellent. very lovely and sad. great writing

    Ruby