My White Flag

by TearsLeftUndried   Jan 27, 2006


Reaching for my razor,
Here I go again.
In this present darkness,
Is where I find my friend.

One after another,
The pain I cannot feel.
They turn into scars,
Wounds that never heal.

These crimson tears now stain my arm,
While I start to cry.
Wishing there was another way,
That I could have died.

Now I\'m raising my white flag,
I\'m giving into myself,
Giving into the world,
And into everyone else

My breath is becomming weaker.
My eyes are starting to close.
Drifting off into the night,
The time has come for me to go.

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  • 13 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Love this poem; it's direct and honest!

  • 18 years ago

    by Eve

    You are so good at writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Hey, i really like it...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    I agree with all the above so much poeple can relate that is kool about it and it is so nicely written,. xoxo Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    I liek this poem and relate well to the feelings driving it...its an excellent portrait of the sentiment and like the symbolism of the white flag all in all amazing i like it alot def one of my favorites