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by The Poetic Child Jan 28, 2006
Sadness, depression /
A kid walks down the street
Broken and torn apart
His Sadness drops to his feet
He has a Broken heart
He walks down all alone
as a tear drops from his face down
The weeping and terror in his tone
but no one hears his sound
His tear is drops to the floor
and no one there on his side
To him, his pain people ignore
and he's wrapped tighter in the bide
He just sits down on his bed
lays there in such silence
Crazy things run in his head
but never such violence
His heart is broken and crushed
from this ones he thought cared
his feelings were took-en and flushed,
though he took his heart and shared
The hurting pain feels so bad
But no one can even see,
True Love is something he never had,
He is actually.....Me
Wow i've read all ur poems and they r FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can u plz comment on mine and tell me how i could improve? emeil me.
by Ian brennan
Awesome job man its really sad but it really expresses itself so good job
That was great! You are an excellent poet...Keep it up..Your work is amazing!!
Thanks a bunch for commenting on my poem. And I do really like this poem, your other ones were good too, but this one is my favorite. I love how it is a story kind of.
by Momentary Relapse
There was some bumps for flow but overall excellently done. That is a great poem.