Tears/Laughter (Diamante)

by HOLLY ARMER   Feb 3, 2006


Tears
iridescent, crystalline
mirroring, expressing, diminishing,
rain, ocean-melody, smile
beaming, giggling, rolling
harmonic, infectious
laughter

**Diamante
Line 1:
one word
(subject/noun that is contrasting to line 7)

Line 2:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 1

Line 3:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 1

Line 4:
four words (nouns)
first 2 words relate to line 1
last 2 words relate to line 7

Line 5:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 7

Line 6:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 7

Line 7:
one word
( subject/noun that is contrasting to line 1)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love this, perfectly done! WOW!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This is simply beautiful, Holly. Great work.
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    So odd, it's good that you're trying out different styles however, and the choice of words in this poem are great!

  • Nice. i really like this one. great write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Very good Ms. Holly...you never cease to amaze me with your talent..write on my friend. Love, Tim