Cinderella (revised)

by Bertha   Feb 10, 2006


Cinderella..
Dressed in love..
Looks out the window..
Admiring a dove..
Over yonder she suddenly sees
A man too perfect..
Can it be?
They are in love..
Tenderly.

So of course shes met him
Many times before.
And now hes knocking on the door.
She runs to answer..
And what does she see?
The prince and her stepsister..
Happy as can be.
How could this happen?
She doesnt know why.
She would be betrayed--
She sees it with her own eyes!
How could they do this?
To her especially..

Is it true.

That "happily ever after"..

Really cant be?

Cinderella..
Dressed in gray..
Sits and cries the day away.
The love of her life
Has broken her heart
And now she can only stay in the dark.

Cinderella..
Dressed in hate..
Runs out past them..
Past the gate.
She runs away..
Never to be seen again..
How could this happen?
Its all because of them.

[im keeping the other one on but i added extra sections to this revised edition of Cinderella.. hope you like it.]

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    by Angel

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    by Jessica

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    by Macy

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    by Emma

    I like this one even more. amaaaaaaaazing

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