Unseen Colour

by Void   Feb 10, 2006


Colourful wishes
In a black and white world
The painted on smiles
Of one little girl
Her eyes sparkle brightly,
Reflections of what she sees
Hide what lies behind them,
Tears long to breathe.

Colourful nightmares
In black and white dreams
Nothing is ever
What it seems
You see her today,
You'll see her tomorrow.
But never will you see
The darkness of sorrow.

Colourful words,
And just one lonely shade
Her false laugh may echo,
But her pain doesn't fade.
This girl she keeps lying,
Can you not see the truth?
Are you denying the fact,
That this girl is you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Wow that is really true. Looks like I found yet another person to be jealous of when it comes to writing. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really enjoyed this one also, I like the way the words just flow after another. The ending really surprised me, I thought it would predictably reflect on yourself yet you turn it around and pin it on us. I also thought the rhyming was excellent and didn't sound forced at all. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Definitely a good poem, the blending of colour was fantastic. Brought out emotions, and painted a really vivid image. Awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I really really enjoyed this poem. Loved the black-and-white and just all of it! Great write, way to go!

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