Oh, Grim Reaper have I not suffered enough?

You've taken an interesting tone for this poem. Yet it is direct and clear, and the atmosphere compensates for structure of poem.I like your use of the Grim Reaper, it works out very well. A very interesting read indeed. Nice work.

*bows down* nuff said =)

Thats agood poem i like it!
~!ugly & unloved!~

Hey, this was a little different than the other poems I have read. I like it though. The repetitivity of that one line had an awesome effect, it made the poem so great. I think the format could change, but that's just me. I personally find it hard to read a poem that stretches from one side of the page to the other.
Great poem.

Loved the poem 5/5