No one cares

by alive in death   Feb 18, 2006


Peace comes when i sleep,
when I'm awake I'm always roaming,
i bump around the walls that enclose my mind.
seems like i cant get past my insides.
i cant be in the line of winners,
cause I've lost for so long,
i wish there was a body that could pull me out of my two dimensional world.
but i take it along with me and make it part of my life cause I'm tired of waiting for that lost dream,
that lost love that i could feel,
now i feel nothing.
i tore down the shrine i made in the back of my head,
the one that was built in worship of someone that might possibly love me,
show interest in me,
look at me,
even think of me.
now i just waist time putting my thought to the air,
meaningless, uselessness,
no one cares.

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I kno how u feel sumtimes it like ur in a dream dn u just want sumone to come and pull u into reality...and the truth is even though in the poem you claim you "feel nothing" that jsut screams that you're feeling too mucch.

    It says that you arnt sure you liek who you are..teh world never takes tiem to get to know you..tehy jugde you even before they rly get to know you. They tell you you're someone you're not which makes it easier for you to do the same.

    Its liek when ur sleeping you can dream of other things..and not of this place that in a sense you feel trapped in. Dreams allow ur mind to wonder, so you cna change and invent who you REALLY long to become, instead of being forced ot becoem who the world labels you as.

    THis poem jsut screams..I WANT TO MAKE A DIFFERANCE . I WANT TO BE MY OWN PERSON< NO ACCUSATIONS JUST LET ME BE ME! I hear you...

    so i pray that peace can also be found when ur awake and stumbling to meet the needs of others and while the world tries to define you I hope that you in return, LEARN TO DEFINE IT.

    Things like friends which are undefinable make it in thise world, JESUS is undefinable...and He made it, so BUDDY keep relying on Him and He will look at you adn think abotu you and CARE ABOUT YOU.

    good luck, and a great piece WOW!

    Lissa

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