Voice Of My Tears

by End Of Eternity   Feb 28, 2006


Falling
Like a drop of rain

Sailing
Towards the river of your heart

Feeling
Like a part of your pain

Hanging
In between so called living art

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Praying
With this new vision all around me

Crawling
To kiss your lips with mine

Fading
Before another one is set free

Crying
To make every scar shine

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Smiling
Watching this darkness so clear

Wondering
Within these eyes so near

Hiding
Behind every unseen fears

Screaming
If you could hear voice of my tears

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Again your writing moves me. You have so much talent. Imagery in this piece is wonderful.

    Screaming
    If you could hear voice of my tears

    You did hear the voice of someone's tears ;)
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Man, u r totally awesome, I really luv it Nitin, can't believe it, ur poems r a masterpiece of its own...

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    This is so beautiful and profound.. it ran deep in my heart.. very nicely written and the rhyme was gr8.. i especially loved the last part.. and ur title was very catchy..
    keep it up
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    This is so beautiful and profound.. it ran deep in my heart.. very nicely written and the rhyme was gr8.. i especially loved the last part.. and ur title was very catchy..
    keep it up
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    The title is exceptionally good, Nitin! The flow is smooth and your choice of words are simply great.

    great job!!!

    shobhana

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