Make It End

by Luke   Feb 28, 2006


Suicide..
Just another way..
expressing the pain..
i feel everyday..

let it happen..
let it end..
make it finish..
no more pretend..

Make it silent..
no midnight screams..
or suffering..
no haunting dreams..

that\'s it over..
already past..
almost there..
this word is my last.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 28th Febuary 2006

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    Wow...this is good.......i love it...i wish i could really write as good as you

  • 19 years ago

    by Wolf

    This is a fairly good poem,less words,more meaning ,simple enough

    i like the last two verses,but you might need to work more one the first ones

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Now i am against suicide now but it still was good though

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    You did it again Luke.... wooooo hoooo! Keep on writing and getting out all the emotion, it truly helps and remember, your new found family is here for you. Very heartfelt write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by MEGAN BUTTERLY

    Great poem. 5/5 keep writing

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Luke