That was so sweet. your a really good writer. 5/5 ~ash

You have a knack for painting pictures with your words and at the same time making them beautiful. I love the description in this. Beautiful, girl!

Hey, somehow i hv reached here today, facing too much of probs with my net and u know what, after reading such a beautiful poem i just dont feel like leaving, u r an amazing writer and u write just so simply and so truely, its so easy to understand what u r trying to say in ur poems and everything around just becomes so simple in life.

U really have a great art in u.

All the best and take care
May God Bless U

Wow lovely poem!!! they portray such true feelings, very well versed!!! I really love the way you conjecture love! Truly awesome!

Btw you really made me laugh by saying that you're happy that I came out of the broken heart phase :-) Well I am quite glad myself!

Thanks for commenting on mine yet again!

Love
Ali

This is a simply wonderful piece of work, Michelle. the flow is smooth, the language simple and the emotions completely genuine.

great write and I also want to thank you very much for your comments on my work and constant support. they mean a lot to me.

good luck and peace
shobhana

This is a lovely poem! I really loved it!!

I loved the flow, it's amazing. Deserves a 5/5 for sure. Keep writing and take care.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne - blaine

That was the sweetest poem I've ever read...it had so much passion...my favorite line was.."I rarely said I love you...its just a line with lies"...i loved that...great poem..

Innocent Crybaby*

This is really good...i can relate...definetly 5/5

Lovely Princess, such adoration in the poem, you could see the magnificence of the feeling, great job!!!

Wow, you're a really good writer
Thanks for the comment on mine, I changed that you sentance so that it would make sense! lol Cul8r