Mindless Repitition

by Tim Fleckney   Mar 1, 2006


Dawn splits
The horizon
While waves
Crash on the beach

Sun-bleached blonds
Jog by
hurrying to unknown
Destinations

Commuter trains
Whiz past
Transporting soul-less
Robots to
Glass cells
They look like
Cattle Cars

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hmm, this has a once again, amazing format and amazing imagery, uh..I think you spelled blondes wrong though..I'm not sure.

    Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Meaningful!! A realistic write... The drabness of the day oozes clearly from this poem and provides a real feel to the reader... Great stuff!

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