DISTRUST

by Lanie   Mar 6, 2006


Trapped in the prison of doubt
I call out to you to and see my existence
The more I pretend not to
The harder it is for me to realize

Crying out for attention
As I lay myself down on a bed of pain
Killing my wits to nothing
Endangering my soul to its remains

Triggered these feelings inside of me
When jealousy tends to rise up
Don’t fall into the habit of being unhappy
Beware of exactly what you are feeling

Covetous thoughts in my mind
Intriguing as I see fit
Intentions of the psyche
You’ll never want to miss

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I think there is much meaning in this poem, I found it quite disturbing so it was really effective! The last couple of lines are sticking with me, they are different and definately hint at darker intentions. nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey! thanks 4 the lovely comment! good poem!! I loved how u used really unique words! It sounded like it came from someone with a mature look on life. really great job. Ruthie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Wow..Awesome poem

    Triggered these feelings inside of me
    When jealousy tends to rise up
    Donâ??t fall into the habit of being unhappy
    Beware of exactly what you are feeling

    I love That Stanza...Great job throughout the whole thing...5/5
    ~ITBOY~

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Wow im sorry you feal that way but keep your head high and keep walkin the pain will end promice 5/5

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