SUDDEN CHANGE

by LOnightOJmareVE   Mar 6, 2006


Weary heart, teary eyes, couple sighs,
Looking back, pondering - she cries.
Joy, love - common and one of a kind,
yet now, truly, they're hard to find.
Sweetness, laughter, and fun remembered,
brought history pains unrecovered.
Pains eased when she was two,
yet aggravated couple years few.
Yesteryears both happy and mild.
Now, wild and unhappy, she can't even smile.
Sweetness, laughter, and fun are now gone.
Joy, love - though common but now undone.
Looking back, pondering - she noticed change.
Weary heart, teary eyes, couple sighs seemed strange.
Personality, character, and face she once bore,
Because o' those, 'tis not the same anymore.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    U know what i think this is the best poem ive read byfar i think its awsome ur a great writer well thanks for the comment. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    Wow i really liked the poem...i can kinda relate to it awesome job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw, sweetie this is a fantastic poem, sorry it took me so long to comment on your poem but i havent been online really, anyways, this is so beautiful and yet sad, its strange how sadness is beauty most of the time, i love the emotion in the poem, its well written and descriptive, lol and i think the title is perfect the way it is, take care, xxoo

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