by Ashley Van Eperen Mar 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I know I made a promise. |
by Bridgette
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Aww.. .that is really sad and I hope that you don't really feel that way.. and if you do, just remember, everything always works out for the best. You did a great job on this and I hope that you are doing ok! |
by Emma
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Powerful....and a simply amazing poem...i loved the frist two stanzas...I understand this poem...and i loved it... |
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It was so moving....I liked it! Very well written and the repetition worked a treat. Ace! |
by Loulou
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Wow this is sad and very deep i loved the rhyming and you did a great job |
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Sad poem, again it showed deep emotion, I can relate to some parts. |