The Note - Continuation of Part II

by Monique   Mar 23, 2006


"Finally, I'm happy.
I took my life,
I'm sorry..
But it was filled with too much strife."

"Preet, I love you.
You're beautiful inside and out.
Without realizing, you helped me live for aslong as I did.
My apologies for everytime I made you pout.

"Karen, I'm deeply sorry,
For I've deprived you of my love.
I'm sorry we didn't have a healthy relationship.
But remember, I love you, and I'm looking over you from above."

"Ryan, "I hate you."
I regret those words I said.
I'm sorry for all the wrong I've done.
I love you are the words I should've spoken instead."

"Dad, You're always gone.
But when you are there,
You show great support and appreciation.
Though, those moments are rare."

"Mom, I love you.
I'm sorry for the tears I've made you shed.
Seemed like you didn't love me,
So, I took my life and bled."

"Wish you could've seen the pain I was in.
Maybe it wouldn't of ended this way.
Maybe I would've been saved.
But I was deaths next prey."

"I didn't want to die..
But my demise was not foreseen.
Now I'll be 6 feet deep..
At the age of fourteen."

**it would mean alot if you commented on this poem please...ill return the favour.= )**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephenie

    Monu,

    Remember when i made you go to that jerk councellor and you cried on my shoulder. Im sorry that I put you through that, I will be sorry forever, I wish I could take away your pain, take it for my own shoulders, for you are to good of a person to have such a burden.

    you are a wonderful writer, your poems touch my heart,,

    love always steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittnee

    I love how it continues. And just because other people may not understand, I do, and it makes total sence. Don't stop writing, your a nature. I love reading your poems, keep it up. Other people see your point of view, don't be afraid to show it

    ~Brit

  • 18 years ago

    by unknown0208

    This is a very beautiful poem keep it up.please rate and comment mine thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    It was a great poem and i love your work//keep it up :P

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is nice too, nicely continued, the flow is still on.

    all the best and take care

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