Tears

by Monique   Mar 26, 2006


Sitting still in an utter trans,
Water fills my lost brown eyes.
Against my eyelashes it flutters,
My life is filled with lies.

As these lonely tears
Stream down my face,
It tells the truth..
My life as a big disgrace.

All these years I've lied to myself,
Convincing myself that I'm ok.
Trying to be happy,
Painting on a smile everyday.

Holding back tears in the presence of others,
These tears find their way out
In the loneliness of my cold, dark room.
These tears, my life, all filled with doubt.

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This certainly has some dark/sad words which i think r coming out of ur pen for the first time, well let the sadness flow as it comes

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Well the finished version was worth seeing!
    This realy is very good, and how you restructured the last stanza is brilliant!!
    Well done!

    Jon
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Very well written dear! its full of emotions..and tears are a part of emotions.....

    well done

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥

    Very good..... you have alot of good words in there i can never think of anything to ryhm with mine BEAUTIFULLY written :)

    check out mine please x x x thanks

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