As Close to heaven as I'll Ever Be

by myshiningstar14   Mar 28, 2006


The smile that radiates from you, the way you bring laughter to my tears; and eliminate all my fears.The hope you bring, and the song you make me sing. Suddenly it's as if I'm breathing deeper than ever before...

Well I ain't no fool, you're as close to heaven as I'll ever be.

The happy tears that form at the thought of your beautiful face. The way you're sometimes so indescribable...and how it'll keep me loving you, even after your gone.

Well I ain't no fool, you're as close to heaven as I'll ever be.

**dedicated to all those in true love...Lissa

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  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    When love outshines anything and everything... it can be all that you think about.... you write about such a variety of things, it's really overwhelming... but i love your style... and the way you write so much joy.... i dont think i've read one sad poem so far... that must mean you have a happy life right now... and i'm happy for you.... i just want to tell you though.... be prepared for God to test you... he's been testing me for awhile... and he tests those he loves.... test could also mean disapline ...

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey Lissa,

    This is really a very beautiful poem, and i am not talking abt the flow in this one as i could feel the message behind this and thats what matters to me, very nicely penned

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by hewholovesherthemost

    Really cute poem.. very original

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