A childs pain..

by Fallen~Tears   Mar 31, 2006


He wakes up thinking maybe today
will be the day everything will be alright
but soon he\'ll realize he\'ll be
crying thosse lonely tears tonight

As screams ring in his ears
and cuts run down his arms
he tries to be ok
trying to act like he doesnt know about lifes harms

only a boy of 5 years old
should never know this pain
but he does
as pain shoots threw every vein

Never knowing any different
from fights and tears
never knowing what its like
to live without all these fears

all he hears is \"your not good enough\"
and \"why are you here\"
thosse are the times he prays
he could just disappear

One last hit
thats all he could take
He\'d be doing them a favor
he was just a mistake

Thats the night
that god took him for his own
He\'d never feel anymore pain
He\'d always be with him sitting beside the golden throne..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Oh, what do I say??? Really very very well written!! This poem not only chocked me up, but it also made me really think about the young children in our society. Thanks for such a good poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by ReBecca

    This is well written. Very sad. It breaks my heart that children have to go through stuff like this from their parents. God bless you.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Hiya! You won one of the prizes in my contest, it was great!
    You are an excellent writer, Meaghen!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wahh.. every poem makes me cry! haha.. your work is excellent, i love it! this poem was especially sad.. you bring your emotions thru in words so well! 5/5
    jesy

  • 17 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! I saw your post on the request forums that said 12 for 20. I don't think that I will have the time to do 12, so I didn't bother putting my name on the list, but I did want to come read atleast some of your poems. So far I can tell you're really good and write from the heart - which is something I always look for when reading anyones poem. The only real problem I saw was a slight spelling error, (which doesn't really count, because it doesn't change the poetry at all, but I thought I'd tell you anyway.) The word ''those'' is spelled with just one 's' . lol I don't mean to be rude, but I do know that people like to be alerted when there's something that could use changing, so I point out spelling and grammar alot. Anyway, great poem. Very sad though :(.
    Off to read a few more now, hopefully they're all as good as this one :) -Stefhy

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